Let's say something that's not the typicall "OMG, Awesome" thing.
The melody is great (actually, the original song is one of my favorite songs made by you), the structure is nice too, and the extra part was really cool (DAT piano-ish thing), the rock+electronic concept reminded your old songs, especially Techrock or whatever was the name (that's a good thing).
But the instruments choice would be better, the guitars sound really synthetic (I can understand that, it's hard find good guitar synths) and didn't sound good with the square-ish lead, actually, the combination of instruments (or maybe the mixing) wasn't very interesting. Until the piano part, the song sounded a little... plain.
Simple words: Great concept, but not the best deveploment.
PD: Sorry for my bad English.